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Shake The Killer. by ~IronKitten:iconIronKitten:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open




Urban Princess, Rocks the socks
off Playa's. Sunshine in a bottle,
Dripping from her hair for
$12.95.

Urban rockstar.
Plays in a garage band.
Has no music.
Just screaming rage.
Mom turns off the power.
High in a bottle.
Dripping from his nose for
$25.00.

Pink Punk finds art in glass.
Breaking more then just cups.
Peeling away one layer at a time.
Raw. He calls it raw. He sell's her soul
for $ 40.oo.

Dip down.
Found in a gutter.
The baby cried foul.
The fire department rescued
it from the ground.
A mother found.
They have suspicions of a father.
Baby was taken for less then
$.50 cents.


World rotating.
World exsisting.
World continuing to swollow
us whole.
©2006-2010 ~IronKitten
:iconironkitten:

Author's Comments

~Head Space~ Thanks to Headagainststock And Sara_stock for the use of these photo's.

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~Schizophrenogenic Mar 18, 2006, 5:07:59 PM
This is just astounding. It's utterly too amazing for words. I've been trying to write something like this for months. You've captured it beautifully. The photo also goes very well. :+favlove:

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People. God knows I love them (Do not fear the sarcasm.)
:iconartistic-technology:
~artistic-technology Mar 18, 2006, 6:03:17 PM
Glad to see you pulled it over from the journal.

Good job.

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++++++

There's freedom in the knowledge that you have taken everything.
:iconironkitten:
~IronKitten Mar 18, 2006, 7:59:51 PM
thank you

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"Contrary to the ultra-Darwinist view, reverse engineering doesn't always work in biology for the simple reason that God is not an engineer; he's a hacker."
:iconironkitten:
~IronKitten Mar 18, 2006, 8:00:15 PM
::smiles and bows:: Thank you very much.

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"Contrary to the ultra-Darwinist view, reverse engineering doesn't always work in biology for the simple reason that God is not an engineer; he's a hacker."
:icondarksoftdangerous:
~darksoftdangerous Mar 19, 2006, 12:00:37 AM
$ 78.45 to destroy humanity
but this deviation was priceless...
original and powerful.
:iconpinocchio-liez:
~Pinocchio-Liez Mar 19, 2006, 12:10:51 AM
Damn...that's the only thing I can say! Every line in this poem packed one hell of a punch. This is brilliant...really it is!

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May God help me if I ever have to use my art...:blackrose:
:iconheadagainst-stock:
~HeadAgainst-stock Mar 19, 2006, 7:55:41 AM
Nice job on the finished work.

Thanks for crediting me :)

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He bit my lip and drank my warmth, from years before.
:iconironkitten:
~IronKitten Mar 19, 2006, 9:15:52 AM
give credit where credit is due. Thanks for letting me use it.

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"Contrary to the ultra-Darwinist view, reverse engineering doesn't always work in biology for the simple reason that God is not an engineer; he's a hacker."
:iconironkitten:
~IronKitten Mar 19, 2006, 9:16:48 AM
::smiles:: Thank you. Im glad you could see it for what it was.

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"Contrary to the ultra-Darwinist view, reverse engineering doesn't always work in biology for the simple reason that God is not an engineer; he's a hacker."
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